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Mario In Newgrounds III Mario In Newgrounds III

Rated 5 / 5 stars

good sprite movie, way better than most

The menu was really cool, as well as the in-game play/pause/etc. You get a 10 on interactivity, but there seemed to be one small problem. The preloader only appears when about 60% of the movie is loaded. Please look into that. Sounds, for instance, should NOT be set to load on the first frame. There is a similar setting for other things like objects. Make sure things load after the first frame so that the preloader appears immediately.

The music and sound was nicely done, especially the Mario voice acting. Also, using plenty of Mario sound effects to match the games was a good idea. I wonder if it could have been compressed/clipped more though. The NG audio portal has some nice instructions about how to reduce audio file size that you may want to look at.

Put some alpha around the pause button so that it is easier to click on.

Make the "other movies" button open a new window instead of replacing the contents of the flash popup.

Work on the grammer. Poor grammer is distracting. If English is not a first language or something, I suggest finding someone that can help improve the grammer.

Finally, the animation was actually quite good in this movie, but maybe work on your anticipations? For instance, it looked unnatural when the goombas just starting moving up into the air (jumping) to land on that mushroom guy. You could size them down then up real quick to give a bit of wind-up for the jump so it looks more natural. Same with Mario punching, you could have him rear back before delivering his punch--it would look more natural. The animation of the red balls could also possibly use improvement...you could have them wind-up for a strike by moving in the opposite direction for a short bit before moving to hit Mario. The purpose is to make it look more natural, so don't over-do it or anything.

Hopefully you will find this review helpful.



An Animusical Minute Ep 1 An Animusical Minute Ep 1

Rated 5 / 5 stars

wow

Simple concept, but totally brilliant. Good job.


Foreverland responds:

Thank you very much! 10's across the board! Can't ask for much more than that! :D


Bunny Fact #1 Bunny Fact #1

Rated 5 / 5 stars

good flash, but

This was a great flash and all. My only complaint is that it uses music from the audio portal but doesnt credit the artist.


Recent Game Reviews


Rattle Snake Rattle Snake

Rated 3 / 5 stars

good game, with one flaw

Please optimize, that's my only complaint. Otherwise, pretty good game.


mailman7 responds:

thanks. I'll try my best


{2007} suicide attacks {2007} suicide attacks

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

please improve

1) needs sound
2) needs music
3) needs more realistic physics..work on falling acceleration



Tutorial: Fist stick game Tutorial: Fist stick game

Rated 2 / 5 stars

optimize

The filesize is way too big, please optimize the sound next time.


Holydrainer responds:

Okay, If u say so.
But next time give an
Review of what you think
of the movie/game.